If I was to revise any other unit projects I would focus on fixing the way I analyze the material given to me or the material I chose. I feel like I do go into detail but I don’t hit the main idea which makes it harder for the reader to have clarity when reading my paper. This is an issue I can work on by using writing structures such as TIEDIED and more. This issue was in all my papers and it was something I tried to improve on every time a new assignment was given.

For the unit two project where I was supposed to analyze a tik-tok I believe I would change the format on how I wrote it. Everything I wanted to say is all there but If I could change the way the paragraphs flowed by switching some, it would make more sense.

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